Friday, November 4, 2011

Part of Raven-Speaker

This is one of my favorite parts of my story Raven-Speaker. Hylar was in a dungeon and Hihkantu who is the leader of an underground thief organization got him out. Now Hihkantu and the other leaders of the organization are interrogating Hylar.

Inside a cell that had been converted into a makeshift planning room sat seven people. If you simply glanced at the group you would not see any connection between them. They might have been the most unique group of people in all of Avon Arret. The group included a former soldier, a widow, a former spy, a hotel owner, a businessman, a stable worker, and a cobbler. But all these people had one thing in common, they were all master thieves. They belonged to a group called The Long Shadows. At that moment, they were in a meeting with two other people, one was the Thief Lord, Hihkantu the other was the new prisoner Hylar. Eight of them were leaders of the biggest undercover scheme in the Avon Arret. The ninth person was being interrogated. The Long Shadows asked tough questions, very tough questions.

The sat on stools in a semicircle around the man, the two woman in the group were at the ends, both had sworn to kill the other many times so it was always good to be safe rather than sorry. The man sat, his hands tied behind his back to the chair. A black hood fell over his head and over his face muffling his short, sharp breathes.

A man sitting on the edge of stool, second from the left, stroking his chin asked the first question. “What is your full name and where do you come from?” he asked keeping his voice level and emotionless. His cane leaned against his stool precariously.

“I am known by many names,” Hylar said simply earning him a slap in the face.

“Answer the question,” growled the man growing angry.

“I am Hylar Tyll, but I am known as The Shadow, The Farmer, and He Who Dulls Men’s Swords. I come from southern Avon Arret.” He said wincing from the blow to his cheek.

“Thank you” responded the man leaning back on his stool pondering the answers.

The woman to the left of him asked the next question, “Why were you trying to infiltrate the castle?”

Hylar paused then answered, “ I was trying to steal some gold from the museum wing,” he answered.

“What gold?” asked the woman narrowing her eyes.

Hylar sighed and then answered, “The King’s Compass.”

A flash of astonishment buzzed through the room. The woman looked back at Hylar, suspicious.

“Why?” she asked simply.

“Because that is what I wanted,” he said.

The woman nodded sitting back in her chair content with his answer. The man on the right side of her however, was not.

“What kind of answer is that!” he cried. “Answer the woman,” he demanded.

“I did,” answered Hylar coolly.

“Don’t talk back to me, don’t you know that we could kill you at any moment?” he said smugly.

“Yes, I know that,” replied Hylar, “But you won’t, you can’t” he said calmly.

“And why do you think that?” said the man pulling out a long curved knife.

“Because I am guessing that Hihkantu has ordered you not to harm me.”

There was a pause as the members of the thief group thought about the bold guess.

It was the man who broke the silence, “Well, to my knowledge we aren’t under any such orders,” once again he unsheathed his knife and ran at Hylar.

The man fell to the ground, pinned down by a giant of a man in a military uniform.

“Cobbler, control yourself,” he bellowed.

The Cobbler sat down, eyes wide, chest heaving.

“Now back to interrogation,” said Hihkantu.

Ironically, it was the Cobbler’s turn to ask the next question.

“Where did you get the necklace and does it have any magical properties?” he growled motioning at the necklace on a table wrapped in an oilcloth.

“I got it from a merchant on the coast; as for magical properties it is a safe charm,” answered Hylar.

“Didn’t do you much good,” said the former spy chuckling. A couple of the group chuckled quietly at the jibe, but most stayed stone silent.

Next it was the stable workers turn.

“Did anyone else know of your goal to steal the Kings Compass?”

“No”

Next came the former soldier.

“Have you tried anything like this before?”

“Yes” Hylar answered, “But they were only small businesses, never a castle.”

The spy asked the next question, “Do you have any formal weapon training or training in magic?”

“Yes, I was trained in swordsmanship but I have never received magical training.”

“And who was your teacher?” asked the spy following up his first question.

“The sword master Nesufrias the Great,” he answered proudly.

“Never heard of him,” said the spy.

The last question belonged to the hotel owner.

She asked, “Do you have any family in the surrounding area?”

“No” he said with a cold finality.

Cheers Everyone!

nAtHaN

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

A story beginning

This is the very beginning of something I've been working on with the power out. (Get it? The whole darkness thing) I'm going to continue it. Oh and by the way I haven't had power for the last 5 days and I might not get it back 'till Saturday. So wish me warmth^^
Heres the piece.

When the world was sunk into darkness, it plunged into anarchy.
Now that light is currency and man is evil.
The only thing that is clear is the difference between life and death.
PLEASE COMMENT
Cheers Everyone
nAtHaN

Monday, October 31, 2011

Status Report...

Our power has been out for two days now and only now at the Black Sheep Deli can I post something. I am doing fine, we've been eating well and we made a fire in our fireplace last night. I am working on something at the moment and when I'm done I will post it. (See if you can guess what it is) The only problem with this is that I won't be done with it for a while:( Please tell me how your October blizzard was. I don't have school today, so its a snow day in October! Hope everyones doing okay.
Keep Warm!
Here's a tiny bit more of the Otto story that I posted a bit of a couple days ago.

“Otto, look at those stars,” said Em pointing into the dark sky. “They look like a person.”

“A really demented person,” muttered Henry under his breath.

“No, look, it looks like a deer. See those are the antlers and there’s the nose,” Henry said turning to Otto.

Otto smiled to himself, “Your both wrong, it looks like a left-handed smoke shifter.”

“What’s that?” asked Em with a puzzled expression.

“Oh you’ll find out when your older,” said Otto obscurely.

Friday, October 28, 2011

Halloween Piece Story Beginning

I wrote this in a writing group I am in with some of my friends. I really am enjoying writing it. Please tell me if you want me to post more of it in the future.

The old lady sat by the side of the road. The road to No-Land. Everyday she sat weaving; no one walked the road to No-Land. No one would be so foolish as to place their shining leather boot on to the mosaic of bones that created the road. Old grass seed littered the sides of the road placed in hope that maybe grass would grow, but now it just served as a reminder of how dead the land was here. But still the lady sat weaving her carpet of fate, waiting for the day when someone would take the carpet to No-Land. The land of the dead.

Otto sat in the torn armchair sipping from his hot mug of coffee. His real name was Autumnal because he had been born on September 21st the Autumnal Equinox. But much to his parents dismay he detested the name and went by Otto. Otto loved Brooklyn, the bustle, the steady sound of cars, and the smell of the Mexican restaurant across from his apartment. On Saturdays he always came to the Cocoa Emporium for a cup of coffee and to hear their weekly jazz performance. A bell tinkled as the front door opened. Otto stood up returning his mug to a plastic dish rack. He walked outside letting the cool Halloween air wash across his face. Today Otto had promised to accompany his best friend Seamus and his wife as they took their twins trick or treating. A voice rang out from in front of him, “Otto, Otto, over here.” That was Seamus next to him was his wife Spring. Standing next to Spring, one of them holding her hand were the twins, Em (Short for Emma) and Henry. Spring’s favorite movie was the Wizard of Oz and she had named the twins after Wendy’s aunt and uncle. Otto laughed, standing below the twins were their too dogs Rhubarb and Raspberry, (named after the main ingredients in Seamus’ favorite pie) Spring always dressed the dogs up for Halloween and this year was no exception. Rhubarb had on a Frankenstein mask while Raspberry had on a light blue doggy jacket and a tiara. They both started whimpering pitifully the moment they saw Otto, they looked utterly miserable. Otto wasn’t surprised; Spring was an artist who worked in a modern art gallery in SoHo. Seamus was an inventor; his most recent invention was a solar powered toothpaste dispenser. Among his other inventions included a pen that sucked up pigment instead of placing it and was perfect for drawing on black paper.

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

One of my line prompts.

Please tell me if you like this. If you do I'll post more.

They rose, from the mountains, the oceans, the forest. To witness the choosing of the hero of the ages.

Sunday, October 23, 2011

Some more of Shannon's line prompts.

1) He touched her pearly face, and wiped off an opal of a tear that fell from her sapphire eyes.
2)The fire in her yellowy eyes pierced me, like a bullet through me soul.
3) Luccia never had a home before, but it seemed now that she had too many.
4) The sound of purity beyond her knowledge suddenly came from the thing on the wall, but she, along with the rest on them, thought it was just a bell.
5) Lemin knew everything; the cooking secrets, the sewing secrets, and the gypsies.

Saturday, October 22, 2011

Random Setting Piece

This is a piece that I wrote for a school assignment on writing a setting piece. And yes I had to make it creepy... Sorry, I just can't help it.

The Fields of Rynheart

The field was like an ocean, waves of wheat and other various grains blowing in the dry whistling winter wind. From above it was like a tornado of grain. The delectable scents of fresh bread and crackling bacon fled like ants scurrying away from a foot toward the unending farmland from a lone fading brick cottage with ivy running up a blue-shingled roof. A sun is shining in a clear sky, a scarecrow stands with his straw hat frosted with a light dusting of snow. The wind blows a thin mist of snow, covering the fields with a shroud of whiteness. A lone killdeer shrieked a warning its black-striped wings glinting in the sun, throwing a shadow on the snowy ground below. A rabbit runs in corn patch chased by a gigantic brutal looking dog. Suddenly the unnatural silence is broken by the sounds of birds warning calls. The man is out of place his black suit contrasting with the pure bright snow. He is carrying a small attaché brief case. He kneels next to the scarecrow and opens the brief case. When he looks up again the scarecrow is no longer smiling. The man chuckles and walks out of the field, the giant graveyard of gray grain stalks. A lone killdeer shrieks.

Wonderstruck

Here's a book review that I did:

Two stories in one, these two characters are very related. One story is in words and one is only in pics. The one in pictures takes place before the other. It's about a deaf girl who lives near New York city but is never allowed to go, because she won't be able to tell if a car is coming. Her mom is a famous broadway actress and she sneaks out of her house to go see her rehearse. Her mom didn't like that idea. The mom got very upset and was going to organize a trip[ for her to go back, but she escapes, and meets her older brother, who she had never heard of before.

The story in words is about a kid named Ben who lives in MInnesota. He was born deaf in one ear, and during a storm he was using the phone, and lightning hit his house, and went through the phone lines and made him deaf in the other. His mother dies, and when he looks through some of her things he finds something mysterious. It was a book given to her by someone named Daniel. Could this be her boyfriend? he never knew of his dad because his mom never talked about it. There was an address in the book to where he lived. It is in New York city. He travels there all by himself and adventually meets an old lady who knows him, but he doesn't know her. It was his grandmother, the girl from the story in pictures.

What I liked about it:

I liked how there were two stories going at once. It just made it a lot more interesting. I also liked how they were both deaf. Obviously not that it's good to be deaf, but how they learned to deal with it, even though it made their lives very rough. I also liked how they were connected. I wasn't expecting that.

What I didn't like:

I didn't like how the writing was just writing. There was no pictures for the story with Ben. Te pictures are the best part, just because they are soooo good! It was also confusing because both of the stories were going on at the same time. It would 4 pages of Ben, and then 4 pictures for Rose. I also didn't read the inside cover which said that was happening, sooo yeah.


Love,
caleb

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

1,000 Views

The Blog has 1,000 views!!! In less than two months. Thank you everyone!!

Prompts?

Any ideas on prompts? If so tell me in the comments and I will post them.

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Tell People!

Please tell every one you know about this blog. Your family, your friends and tell everybody you tell to tell their friends.

More Pictures From the Bridge of Flowers




I'm starting to grow obsessed with photography, I'm going to be posting a lot more pictures from now on.