Saturday, December 31, 2011

Random Haiku

My gloves in my hands.

My snow boots are in my feet.

It’s opposite day.


Happy New years Eve!!!!

Thursday, December 29, 2011

The Spool of Thread

Random poem I wrote about wishing to live moments again.


We hear the people saying as we walk the square.

That they wish that time was a spool of thread.

A spool that they would unwind and unwind till the present they fled.


In the gallery they speak of art, of Picasso and Monet.

That they see magic in the strokes of the brush on the paint.

The only things the present hasn’t begun to taint.


You and I shall go, to the bridge.

The bridge over the sun-set splattered water, red.

And then we shall see that the art is not dead.


We shall go to the pier.

To see the ocean waves.

And watch the fishermen catch their fish, sparing them a watery grave.


We shall go to an open field and see the moon is calling.

We will feel in our hearts the heart-felt call of the stars.

And in the clouded sky the red twinkle of Mars.


And today we shall remember these moments.

And wish that we lived it again.

And then you and I shall unwind our life’s spool of thread.


Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Snowflake-Memory Poem

This is a poem I wrote about how snowflakes are like memories. Enjoy and comment!


Snowflakes are like memories.

They drift down on to your tongue.

Stay there for a fleeting second.

Then melt away into nothing.


They fall thickly, accumulating in thick piles and mounds.

They cushion your falls.

And chill your bones.

Then melt away into nothing.


They come in blizzards.

And in muddy slush.

They can be ugly or beautiful.

Then the melt away into nothing.


All seem the same.

But all are different.

Everyone is unique.

But they all melt into nothing.


Some stay for ages.

Others do not.

Some disappear as they are falling.

They all eventually melt into nothing.

The only thing we can do is put them in the freezer and hope.

That our memories don’t melt into nothing.

Monday, December 26, 2011

Haiku Monday

From now on every Monday I will post a Haiku (or poem if I fail on a haiku)


This haiku is a haiku I wrote about a baby Japanese Maple that is in our yard. Tomorrow I will post a picture of it, I can't right now because it's dark outside.

Gray wilting branches.

Drooping over cold hard ground.

Maple in winter.

Sunday, December 25, 2011

Ayla's Writing Piece

Fear is like a fence, you can't go through it, you cant break it, but you can go over it and leave it behind.

Haiku a day challenge.

I have a new challenge for myself, and that is to write one haiku everyday for an entire year. I encourage other people to try this or a variation of this like: a poem a day, a page of a story a day, and etc. Along with that I am resuming my quest to make 1000 paper cranes. Happy Holidays!

Thursday, December 22, 2011

After the battle.

This is a piece describing the mood after a battle. Remember war is not the answer. Happy Holidays.

The battlefield is shrouded in an eerie silence. The only sound other than the cries of the wife’s and children of those men killed in yesterday’s bloody massacre is the sound of the river next to the the crimson battle field.

Death, a cloak, so heavy, of the memories of lost comrades and friends. Soldiers from both side see the carnage and bow their heads in respect of the fallen. Regret and guilt spills over some, tears fall on to the stained ground and the soldiers wonder how this horrible thing could've happened. The sin of war.

Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Big Line Prompts List

These are a bunch of line prompts that I wrote down at writing group. These are some of my favorites.
Happy Holidays.

I give thanks.
The food is set on the table.
Let the note slide.
She stepped off the train and everything shifted.
Each belly cries.
In the empty school bus upon the seat she found a diamond necklace.
There are ladders in the sky, starry skeletons.
You are dropping down behind the hill.
The glass workshop is now a laboratory.
A single feather fell.
Dreadful things have been going on there.
The emperor of ice cream.
We feaster well in to the evening and through the night.
Winters without snow.
Patience and the mulberry leaf become a silk robe.

Line Prompts

I will be posting a gigantic list of line prompts when I get home. So yeah.
Happy holidays

Sunday, December 18, 2011

Haikus

Tumbling, falling.
In never ending descent.
Floating in the clouds.


Branch over water.
Draped with webs of frozen ice.
Sits, frozen in time.

Oh and by the way, this is the 100th post on this blog! Yay!
Happy Holidays

Wednesday, December 14, 2011

The Lost Voice-- Chapter One.

This is a new story I just started. In the land of Saltinea ( pronounced, SAL-TEEN-UH) when a person is born they have no voice. At the age of twelve they go out to search for it. This is the story of a girl named Lyr's search. It is told partly in diary entries and in live action. Please enjoy and comment. Happy Holidays everyone!

Hello reader, if this book has found its way into your hands, I know that I can trust you.

Welcome to the diaries of Lyr Tolasquiss.

Chapter 1

Birthday

In the land of Saltinea for the beginning part of your life you can’t talk. You have no voice. Then when you reach the age of twelve you are turned free into the city in search of your voice. No one really knows how you find it. But most people do find it anyways. Now that I am turning twelve, I will leave my parents forever in search for my voice.

Dear Diary,

This is my first diary entry and I hope to have many more. Today, my twelfth birthday and along with many other gifts, I received the typewriter I am writing these diary entries on and a diary for me to glue the entries in to. It wasn’t much, Mother baked a cake and we all sat around the table as I blew out the wax candles. To me this tradition seems very strange. In the birthday dinner, the snuffing of the candles and the making of a wish is the highlight of the dinner. But it seems to me that birthdays are meant to celebrate life, not focus on snuffing it out into darkness and smoke.

But today has even more importance than that for today I enter the city alone, for the first time in my long life I will finally be able to freely explore Saltinea’s dark alleys and tiny shops. For the first time I will be alone.

Lyr

October 8th

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Lyr walked out the tall wooden door of her house and tasted the crisp, sweet fall air. Finally she thought, some privacy. She hopped briskly down the cracked stone steps that separated her house from the cobble stone road in front of her. A sound rang through the air, filling the street with music. Walking down the narrow street was a street performer carrying an organ grinder. Sitting on top the interment was a jacket and hat clad brown monkey. She smiled enjoying the melody that floated lightly away from the ever-cranking organ grinder.

The man smiled too in a wide grin that showed Lyr a yellow holey smile.

“A bit of coin for a cold old man girly?” he asked hopefully. Holding out a red velvet pouch.

Lyr shrugged, then shook her head putting on what she hoped was an apologetic face. “I’m sorry, mister,” she whispered. She then walked quickly down the road. The organ man followed her.

“Don’t like to talk missy?” the man asked smiling in amusement. Lyr shook her head looking down at her brown clogs. “Well then, why don’t you let me help you find your voice?” He asked seriously. “I be an expert at speaking as it would happen,” said the man thoughtfully. Lyr shrugged once again, shifting around awkwardly. “Is that a no?” asked the organ man disappointedly.

“Yes sir,” mumbled Lyr finally making eye contact with the street performer.

“Calls me sir she does,” laughed the man a grin painting itself on his face. His face suddenly turned somber once again, “But are you sure about my offer, girly? I’ve been wanting to go on an adventure for a while now, this is my last chance to have some fun with my life,” said the man sadly shaking his head. “I can help you find your voice,” he offered hopefully. “Everyone has a voice you know,” the organ grinder pointed to himself, “I found mine years ago when I was a child. It was easier for me than it might be for you. The trick is to see something that you can’t keep silent about,” he said knowingly.

“So how about it,” said the organ man logically, “ You need your voice, I want an adventure, everyone wins,” he paused, “So what do you say,” he asked.

Lyr nodded.

Monday, December 12, 2011

Please give me feed back!

I know that I already posted this, its just that I really want feedback. I will be entering this poem into the MA science poetry contest. So please give me your constructive criticism. I want my poem to be perfect when I enter it.

The orchestra of the storm booms in victory over its arch enemy sunlight. The violins of swaying trees and the cellos of creaking trees are joined by the loud timpani of falling trees.

Deep gray storm clouds push away the sunlight rudely dismissing it as inferior.

Bright lightning flashes, splitting the spines of frail tress roughly apart. Boom! The ground shakes as the weeping willow falls on to the soft spongy ground.

The willow is not the only one weeping; a mother bird sings a lamentation at the sight of the circle of twigs that has been crushed under the heavy trunk of the willow.

The sadness of beautiful songs that will never be sung.

A mural of rain paints the soggy sky adding more to the symphony of the storm.

The storm slowly becomes dormant once again waiting for the right moment to strike once more.


Sunday, December 11, 2011

A lot more of Otto

This is a bunch of the Otto story. Happy Holidays, and please enjoy, follow and comment. This was really fun to write, so yeah. Cheers Everyone!

Otto woke up, he stood, slowly absorbing his surroundings. I am alone, he thought letting the strange idea roll around in his brain. It was completely silent. It was as if some one had pressed an almighty mute button.
Never in all of his life had he experienced such calm, such silence. Noise was his life boat, his comfort. Living in Brooklyn noise was the only thing he could always count on being there. Now he had nothing.
He stood in the center of a spiral. The spiral was created by tiny pebbles and sand that would be found in a zen garden. Otto walked out from the center of the gigantic spiral. Whenever he stepped on a ridge that formed the lines of the spiral he felt the pebbles moving down under his foot, but when he looked back he saw no depression or indent in the mounds.
How long he walked he did not know, the land was gray and day and night were no different so as he walked in the endless spiral he lost track of time. He felt no need to eat, drink or sleep. The only feeling he felt was a faint tugging as if someone had attached a string to his chest and was lightly pulling. The feeling never strengthened or weakened and became familiar to him, a comfort as was the endless spiral which never ended and seemingly never would.
As Otto walked in the spiral he started to notice small changes. Now little sprigs of grass and weeds scattered the pebbles of the spiral. Eventually the surface of the ground changed and instead of pebbles the spiral was now formed by cobblestone.
One thing that didn't change however was the tugging feeling in his chest.It was always there, pulling him forward. But one day it suddenly stopped. As it stopped Otto staggered backward suddenly having to support himself. He looked ahead of him. There was a sign. The sign read:
Transitions,
Take the North Path,
187 Shingles North

Behind the sign the spiral stopped and formed a smooth granite pathway. Otto stepped on the path.

Friday, December 9, 2011

Photos

These are some pictures I took at Duck Harbor beach in Welfleet, Cape Cod. It is one of our favorite beaches and is a rock beach. These are pictures of some dunes near the beach. Cheers and Happy Holidays.






Thursday, December 8, 2011

Inheritance Cycle Book Review

Happy Holidays Everyone! This is my first book review! Enjoy, more writing coming soon.
The Inheritance Cycle consisting of: Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr, and Inheritance are the four books that make up the series. Written by the fantastic author Christopher Paolini I highly recommend them to anyone who enjoys reading fantasy. The series is a bit classic and cheesy and will remind some people of Lord Of The Rings. But otherwise the series is almost flawless. The character names are interesting although some are hard to pronounce and the language is eloquent but not overly complex. Most lose ends are tied and there are only a few nagging problems. In some books there are some parts that seem pointless. Characters that you might think are important only show up in one book and there are some contradicting parts of the books. The plot has many twists and turns and is interesting to read. The action sequences are particularly well written and detailed. Most characters have interesting unique personalities and this series gets you imagining your own fan fiction of the series. These books are not for people who can't finish long books. The 4rth book is 800 pages and the three before are not far behind. Over all I would give it a 9.5/10. This is a must read for all who enjoy a long fantasy book.