Caleb's story!

Here's The very beginning of my story, people from the Common School have seen it before:

Kendra awoke on an early Saturday morning in Amherst Massachusetts. The warm rays of sun beat down on her long brown hair. She gets out of bed and starts walk down the hallway. Her Common School shirt matches the Hallway carpet. As she slides her feet across the carpet she stares at family photos. When she reached the end of the hallway a bowl and a box of cereal was laid out on the table before her. A screechy noise was made when she pulled the chair out. As she sat down her mother walked in. “morning Kendra,” She said with a yawn.” Morning mom.”

“KENDRA! STOP BITING YOUR FINIGERNAILS!” Her mom exclaimed.

. After she finished her cereal and got her normal lecture on how bad it is to bite your finger nails Kendra headed back to her room. When she entered into her room she started to bite her finger nails again. As the nail fell to the ground a portal/puddle like thing appeared. She jumped in..

It isn't very good, but tell me what you think.

-caleb